Monday, October 25, 2004

Reaction to Contrast Essays

The sample essays seemed well written and make it look very easy to write. This seems like it should be a fairly easy essay to write by looking at these essays, but then again i have said this before. I

Friday, October 22, 2004

Classification Essay Reaction

My classification essay at first seemed really hard, but as i got writing it got easier. The reason I chose to write about the different catagories of athletes is becaue I can really relate with the subject and I chose it hopping that because it was something i was interested in and had experience in that it would make it easier for me to right about, and it did. I think that even though the paragraphs didnt seem to really work at first. But when everything was put together and finished it seemed to work alright.

Monday, October 18, 2004

BLOGS I HAVE VISITED AND POSTED ON

Friday, October 15, 2004

CLASSIFICATION ESSAY #1

Craig Miller
English 101
Oct. 19, 04
Classification Essay First Paragraph
Running through the woods, its the last 1/2 mile of the state meet, and I feel like im going to die, gasping for air, but I keep pushing. This is what I have been working for all year long. The long 5 mile runs the mile long sprints, the reapeats in lost valley all have prepared me for this day. And being just an average athlete I have had to work hard to get to where I am. I think that athletes in general can be classified into three different groups. There are the true athletes that have a heart and desire to play sports, and are the type to always be on time for practice and never miss a game. There are the natural athletes who are unbelievably good at any sport naturally, who dont even need to practice to be better then the average athlete, and then there are the so called "athletes" who really dont have much skill and usually dont have any desire to be participating in sports, but usually are forced into them or are participating for other reasons.
The natural athletes are athletes that dont really need to try very hard to be good or even better then the average athlete at pretty much any sport that they play. They are just naturally athletics and skilled. One of my friends in highschool, was a natuaral athlete. He was good at everything, he was our #1 cross country runner, point guard on the basketball team, one of the star baseball players, our leading scorer in soccer and in basketball. It seemed like he could just pick up any sport he wanted and natural succeed in it. Dont get me wrong though, im not saying that natural athletes dont work hard. Hard work is what makes them superior over other athletes, but they are naturally talented and usually because of this they are leaders, or team captains, because there ability inspires other people and makes other athletes look up to them and work harder to be as good as them.
The catagory that I consider myself to fall under is the average or everyday athlete. I work hard day in and day out trying to make myself better at the sports i play. Despite all the hard work and training it is impossible for some people to be the best or be better then the, natural athletes. But average athletes usually have very good work ethics, skill and want to be the best that they can. Theses athletes are usually the core of the team, they are the guys that are always competing with each other in practice, they fall in between the natuaral athletes and the "so called athletes". They are usually looked up to for there hard work and determination, even though they may not be the "best" on the team. There are also some kids that to be perfectly honest just "suck" at sports. But however they love sports and try there absolute hardest to do thier best. Because of this I consider them in this catagory.
The "so called athletes" are the athletes that really annoy me. I think that you should only play a sport if you have a love for it or if you desire to play or do that sport. But there are people who will play just to be popular, or are forced by their parents. These people are the type that dont care about the team, or anyone on it. They are annoying they disturb the team practices and sometimes they totally ruin the outcome of an event or game. For example some of the kids that played sports in the highschool i went to just played to be cool and didnt really care about actually doing well in the sport or helping out the team. They were pot heads and druggies who drank almost everynight and were never ready or cared about a game or event that everyone else was all pumped up for and really wanted to play and win.
Overall I think these are the three main groups of athletes, from my personal observations. I was lucky to have such a good cross counntry team though highschool. All the runners on our team were kids that could be placed in the first two catagories of this essay. We all worked together and were very successful in everything we did. We all had similar goals for ourself and team goals as well. However every sport was not like this, in fact having a team that does not have any of the "so called athletes" is very rare. An unfurtunatly every other sport I played had some of these kids and it made it difficult and kind of frustrating to deal with them.



Athletes, there are many types of athletes. There are the the natural athletes who can play any sport imaginable and be better then the everyday average athlete, which is the next "group" of athletes. These athletes are dedicated and have skill in the sports they play but require practice and hard work to become above the average athlete, these athletes usually have a true heart for sports. The last group of athletes are the athletes that are really not to athletic at all or maybe they are athletic and pressured into playing sports when they really dont like them.

Wednesday, October 13, 2004

POST ON 3 SECTIONS OF ISEARCH

My isearch writing has been kind of tough so far. I am still working on the "what" paragraph and the paragraphs just dont seem to be that great. I was thinking of changing the subject of my isearch but I havent been able to think of anything that would be a whole lot easier to write about. So I am still trying to make the background, why, and what work together.

Friday, October 08, 2004

Classification Essay Reactions

I cant really say that I liked the first essay, just because the way she was talking about guys, I would have to say that it is laid out and very good writing.

Secind essay was well written, but i dont agree with her when she said that all girls would agree with what she is saying, because there are some girls that fit into those catagories of "sports fans" and even if they dont they may have other things that they are obcessed witht that they dont mind letting the guy watch his football game with friends, just so that they can do the thing that they want to do.

Thursday, September 23, 2004

POST 5A

"A man is a success if he gets up in the morning and gets to bed at night, and in between he does what he wants to do. " - Bob Dylan. I think that this quote is very right and sometimes it helps me when I feel like I am being pushed into being a so called "successful person" by becoming a "Doctor", making a ton of money, having two houses, etc...... I interpret this quote as pretty much saying that success is not all that "stuff", success in only success if the person is happy with what he or she is doing or has accomplished. When I think about this quote it makes me feel a lot better about what I am doing, and I just tell myself, "I am successful I am happy with what Im doing I am accomplishing what I want to and I am setting reasonable goals for myself instead of being unhappy trying to accomplish goals that other people have set or forced on me."

POST 5

It seems to me like the world is becoming so technologically advanced that in some ways it almost not a good thing. I was thinking about this today as i was playing a computer game, called an empire divided. An Empire Divided is an online computer game that is one of the most advanced games I have ever played. the game is set up like a regular world where you build your character, develop certain traits, buy, organize and pay rent on your house, buy clothes, go on missions and eventually (months) you work your way up to being a really advanced charcter in this game. The technology they have know makes it so much fun and very addicting, like interacting with other players and chatting while your playing with them. Companies that produce these games are doing a very good job "hooking" there custumers. For a "game" to do this to people makes it very intereting to see what technology will bring in the years to come. And wheither or not it will be for good or for the worst.